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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题媒体类 - 广告与儿童保护
关键词advertisements, aimed at children, banned
考察能力评估商业自由与儿童保护的边界

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:thousands of advertisements each year
├── 渠道:television, online, schools, public spaces
├── 立场:largely agree with ban or heavy restriction
└── 理由:children lack critical faculties

【主体段1 - 支持禁止】
├── 核心论点:cognitive vulnerability
├── 解释:cannot distinguish entertainment/persuasion
├── 广告手段:cartoon characters, colours, songs
├── 后果:pester, materialism, obesity
└── 道德论证:unfair to manipulate those who cannot defend

【主体段2 - 反驳反对意见】
├── 反对意见1:free speech(反驳:children are special)
├── 反对意见2:parents' responsibility(反驳:unrealistic)
├── 反对意见3:media literacy(反驳:unrealistic for young children)
└── 国际证据:Sweden, Norway, Quebec

【主体段3 - 折中方案】
├── 让步:complete ban impractical
├── 方案:prohibit directly aimed at children below certain age
├── 重点产品:unhealthy food, sugary drinks, toys
└── 关键标准:designed to exploit vulnerabilities

【结尾段】
├── 让步:absolute bans present challenges
├── 立场:should be prohibited or regulated
└── 道德升华:deserve protection when most impressionable

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
cognitive vulnerability认知脆弱性children's cognitive vulnerability
take at face value字面理解take advertising claims at face value
celebrity endorsements名人代言using celebrity endorsements
pester纠缠,不断要求children pester their parents
materialistic values物质主义价值观develop materialistic values
infringe on侵犯infringes on commercial free speech
stringently regulated严格监管stringently regulated
impressionable易受影响的when they are most impressionable

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"cognitive vulnerability"老年人保护、消费者权益话题
"take claims at face value"媒体素养、假新闻话题
"develop materialistic values from an early age"消费主义、教育话题
"realistically monitor"任何讨论监管可行性的话题
"designed to exploit vulnerabilities"技术伦理、数据隐私话题

💭 思考延伸


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